The story drafts :3

Hellooo!!
On my last post, I talked about making a physical story diagram/draft for my cross fandom AU KISETSU. There's other pages currently being made so please be patient ^^
(little TW for death/suicide)
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On the storyline, I might've forgotten to add the rest of their concerts (KSTSU had 8 and slACE had 4 :p
If anyone wants to see more then check out the world I made ^^ (KISETSU: FUYU Winter Trauma) It has more details on FUYU on his own.
If anyone would like to help out with making these better than that would be great! Please give me tips on how to write good stories and characters, this is my 3rd time doing this so I'm not that experienced > <
Anyways, Thank you for listening!! <3